Commit 6677fbbb authored by Francois-Rene Rideau's avatar Francois-Rene Rideau
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Some feedback by Vadim Nasardinov

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......@@ -457,8 +457,8 @@ for code reuse across work groups.
{\ASDF} changed all this
by providing a \textit{de facto} standard for specifying systems.
{\ASDF} made it easy to specify how one system could depend on others.
This could now be done simply by system name, trusting to {\ASDF}
(when properly configured) to find the requisite
This could now be done simply by system name, entrusting to {\ASDF}
(when properly configured) the task to find the requisite
system definitions and system contents.
Unfortunately, {\ASDF} had several flaws that made this system configuration,
and the social software development process, more difficult than need be
......@@ -589,7 +589,7 @@ or update the configuration as library source trees evolve.
The new decentralized configuration facilities
software distribution from software integration.
The operating system software distribution (e.g. Debian or RedHat)
The operating system software distribution (e.g. Debian or Red Hat)
or user-level software distribution (e.g. clbuild)
can simply provide software modules together
with proper configuration as to where to find those modules.
......@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ Unlike other build systems, such as {\make},
managing systems that are compiled and loaded in the current {\CL} image}.
Build tools of other languages typically rely
on some external operating system provided shell
on some external, operating system provided shell
to build software that is loaded into virtual machines
({\em processes} in Unix parlance) distinct from the current one.
When using these other languages, all the state necessary to build software
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