From 4e65d3f7d1fddc478f2229494f333fd15646efb2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: rtoy <rtoy>
Date: Tue, 22 Jan 2008 21:52:21 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Fix some overfull boxes by rewording a few items.

---
 docs/cmu-user/aliens.tex                |  6 ++++--
 docs/cmu-user/hierarchical-packages.tex | 12 ++++++------
 docs/cmu-user/serve-event.tex           |  2 +-
 3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/cmu-user/aliens.tex b/docs/cmu-user/aliens.tex
index c0c29e0c3..db9f3e45b 100644
--- a/docs/cmu-user/aliens.tex
+++ b/docs/cmu-user/aliens.tex
@@ -966,8 +966,10 @@ possible using \code{malloc} or \code{make-alien} since we need about
     (n c-call:int :in))
     
   (defun test-dotprod ()
-    (let ((x (make-array 10000 :element-type 'double-float :initial-element 2d0))
-          (y (make-array 10000 :element-type 'double-float :initial-element 10d0)))
+    (let ((x (make-array 10000 :element-type 'double-float 
+                         :initial-element 2d0))
+          (y (make-array 10000 :element-type 'double-float
+                         :initial-element 10d0)))
         (sys:without-gcing
           (let ((x-addr (sys:vector-sap x))
                 (y-addr (sys:vector-sap y)))
diff --git a/docs/cmu-user/hierarchical-packages.tex b/docs/cmu-user/hierarchical-packages.tex
index 22d2eb5ab..74e08a6be 100644
--- a/docs/cmu-user/hierarchical-packages.tex
+++ b/docs/cmu-user/hierarchical-packages.tex
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ modifications to the underlying \clisp{} implementation. Relative
 package names require only small and simple modifications.
 
 
-\subsection{Relative package names}
+\subsection{Relative Package Names}
 
 Relative package names are needed for the same reason as relative
 pathnames, for brevity and to reduce the brittleness of absolute
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ dots. A single dot means the current package, two dots mean the parent
 of the current package, and so on.
 
 Table~\ref{tbl:hierarchical-packages} presents a number of examples,
-assuming that packages named \verb|foo|, \verb|foo.bar|,
+assuming that the packages named \verb|foo|, \verb|foo.bar|,
 \verb|mypack|, \verb|mypack.foo|, \verb|mypack.foo.bar|,
 \verb|mypack.foo.baz|, \verb|mypack.bar|, and \verb|mypack.bar.baz|,
 have all been created.
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@ Consider the following:
   
 When the current package (the value of the variable \code{*package*})
 is \code{common-lisp-user}, you might expect \verb|.foo| to refer to
-\verb|cl-user.foo|, but it does not. It refers to the non-existent
+\verb|cl-user.foo|, but it does not. It actually refers to the non-existent
 package \verb|common-lisp-user.foo|. Note that the purpose of
 nicknames is to provide shorter names in place of the longer names
 that are designed to be fully descriptive. The hope is that
@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ proceeds as it does with a string argument.)
 Note that you should not use leading dots in package names when using
 hierarchical packages.
 
-\subsubsection{Using hierarchical packages without modifying cl:find-package}
+\subsubsection{Using Hierarchical Packages without Modifying cl:find-package}
 
 Even without the modifications to \code{cl:find-package}, authors need
 not avoid using relative package names, but the ability to reuse
@@ -181,8 +181,8 @@ relative package names is restricted. Consider for example a module
 \verb|my.foo.baz| packages. In the code for each of the these packages
 there are relative package references, \verb|..bar| and \verb|..baz|.
 
-Implementations that have the new \code{cl:find-package} would carry
-the keyword \verb|:relative-package-names| on their \code{*features*}
+Implementations that have the new \code{cl:find-package} would have
+\verb|:relative-package-names| on their \code{*features*}
 list (this is the case of \cmucl{} releases starting from 18d). Then,
 in the \textit{foo} module, there would be definitions of the
 \verb|my.foo.bar| and \verb|my.foo.baz| packages like so:
diff --git a/docs/cmu-user/serve-event.tex b/docs/cmu-user/serve-event.tex
index e2e005ac5..bf4d8aa17 100644
--- a/docs/cmu-user/serve-event.tex
+++ b/docs/cmu-user/serve-event.tex
@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ descriptor as it's single argument.
       
   This macro executes the supplied forms with a handler installed
   using \var{fd}, \var{direction}, and \var{function}.  See
-  \code{system:add-fd-handler}.  The forms are wrapped in an
+  \code{system:add-fd-handler}.  The given forms are wrapped in an
   \code{unwind-protect};  the handler is removed (see
   \code{system:remove-fd-handler}) when done.
 \end{defmac}
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